Voted For: MoTiF

Ok, Motif came with better punches and better structure. Word, your lines were stretched at times, and some of your lines didn't make any sense at all. But no hate, you started off pretty good, just your verse fell apart after a lil' bit. And on your finisher "you just got BURNT, so leave the boardroom you fuckin' apprentice" would've worked better had you said FIRED instead of BURNT, as that's what Donald Trump really says. But hey, maybe you saw an episode of the Apprentice that I didn't, I don't know. Your verse just could've took a little more effort...
Vote - Motif

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