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Old 09-11-04, 04:23 PM   #9
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

I took this as you were implying like someone with complete paralysis...and that is rare in most spinal injuries...because there are so many different injuries....so i give it a 6/10

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

why was shyne in quotes? you didn't take that anywhere, you might as well have said shine...the bottom line was ok....7/10

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

this was pretty clever, i give it an 8/10

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals

this had me laughin, kind of a played concept, but you were creative with it...so 8/10

over all 29/40



I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

the first line kind of lacked, but was picked up by the 2nd, nice work, 7/10

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

this was decent, kinda funny, but nothin special....7/10

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food

this was a good multi, good punch, 9/10

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime

i got the hate crime line...but i felt it was kind of stretched, so 7/10

as you can see it was a close battle, but kid p-dizzle edged it out by 1 point

good battle, much respect to both of you
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