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Old 09-11-04, 04:34 PM   #42
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Voted For: Victimizer

Victimizer: You used a cum line plus shes a girl, wow...but still won. You ahd a better, although stretched to death structure. You had wordplay, and better punches, I liked the midas line, that the only real good one though, everything was either stretched or average.

yvonne: that shit was ass...your structure was horrible...took me like 5 minutes to read each line...lol. Then you had some wack shit about spittin candy bars. None of your lines connected...this was bad, even for a rushed verse
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