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Old 09-11-04, 04:37 PM   #8
Abraxas
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gotdamn ... ya both verse were iight
Auto: ya lines were iight good verse overall but there were fuckign strecthed like hell which gets ya strucutre out so id give strucutre and flow to trojan ya had the punches though trojan got the personals um next time keep ya shit structred and get a good flwo with ya verse but nice overall
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