Voted For: shake-spear

alright...i'm grading this on a curve..........and no mercy lowers the average...

he go around tellin poeple hes young. wut u want pitty?/
well its pitiful i can keystyle and beat u that proves u shitty/

decent punch/personal 6/10

no wordplay needed and multi's would destroy-u-fast/
how ya record trash dumbass u think u nice well boy-u-gased/

this was ok...nothin special...6/10

he know he gon lose so he bets shake'll win to earn-cash/
and i would throw ya rhyme book away but fuck it i burn-trash

pretty good...7/10


ull learn-fast, cause nomercy beatin me is ridiculous/
make u lick-ya-lips ,pucker up, and give my dick-a-kiss/

this was funny....8/10

if dis kid-is-sick he da common cold im syphilis/
battlin me is like suicide u might as well have slit-ya-wrist/

nice closer...9/10

over all..36/50

After im threw with you you’ll be resting in the cafeteria/
Ill be runnin all over you like im a sick disgusting germ called bacteria/.

simple and kind of amature, 4/10

This mothafucka “shake-spear” wanna take me down to my knees/
But ill be the first to make him drop down and put his hands up and freeze/.

same as before 4/10

He’ll recognize me as the crazy one that runs all over him like a flock of flys/
Ill drop you so fast ill be the one to be saying my good-bye’s/

flock of flies? never heard of such a thing......2/10

Now ill be spitin hard vocab you’ll hafe to look them up in the dictionary/
Ill make you so pist at me ill make you fly yer pussy ass outta her like a faggot canary/.

this was funny.....but not to your advantage....4/10


My style of rap is unknown to you its like im an affection/
To you and how I do it so you better find something for yer own protection/.

this was weak.....3/10


sorry no mercy, your getting better and better, you just need to start using some complexity and wordplay.....shake's didn't use much of it...but he didn't need to...his understanding of battling won this over easy....nice verse for bein keyed shake..

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