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Old 09-11-04, 07:13 PM   #8
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

ctfu...yo... damn Arch... wtf happened to you?...this shyt wasn't even close!
the hardest line you had wasn't even about her... it was about her sister... who ain't even registered on the site!
LF killed you with the metaphors... can't front... ol gurl got a way with words...
Arch... ya shyt was real simplistic this time around... wheres the wordplay, metaphors, multi's, and punches?

ya bars need space to enter ya "run-ons" like "treadmills"
...that shyt right there was killer!
ur record's "paralyze" just like arthritis to double-joints!*
...nice closer! .lmao

Yo arch... ya gotta throw ya punches like ya wanna put a fist through the other side of ya opponents body! Them shyts you threw were frail... it was like watching a geriatric boxer picking a fight with the Mike Tyson pre-Buster Douglas!

come back again when you ain't got all that shyt on ya mind and drop like ya usually do...

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