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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Shotta Got This ...
Shottaboy: ... Structure was good here i can see that you bin workin on it; first two lines could've had better structure ... Punches were good best one was prob tha stiller one: nice ... although tha cum hard is pretty played it was still effective ...
Unkown Killa: ... Ya Had Nice Structure ... Ya Vocab is a lil repetitive though; You used tha word kid alot ... Punches didn't really make that much sense ...
Vote:ShottaBoy
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