mess with me get cooked
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Voted For: lil kid
i leave this chump-dead, when we go and bump-headz,
only time u got '2 in da sheetz' iz when u sleep in 'bunk-beds'! (ova)
^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER AND PUNCH
i'll break-all-ya-spits u aint neva gonna be rippin-me,
peeps take-all-ya-shit.............cept ya virginity!,
//^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NICE MAYNE
even if u gave 'alchohol 2 ya verse' u still aint got 'drunk-rhymes',
you should stay in this forum...cuz you alwayz 'front-linez!'
^^^^^ PERSONAL & PUNCH NICE MAYNE
spit? u best-not, when u got 'heartburn' iz da only time ya 'chests-hot',
and u cudn't 'look high on da table' if u 'stared at ya desk-top!',
//^^^^^^^ HA NIC PUNCH MAYNE
when u ‘piss in ya pants’ iz da only time ya ‘flowins-tight’ (tight pants)
Ya must be ‘aimin ya punches left’…cuz dey ain’t goin-right! (damn)
// WAT! PUNCH KO DAMN IT
choker-RUN, you'll only eva have super soaker-gunz,
me facin hims lyk '3 minus 2'.............u know-it's-1!!!,
^^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHH WHAT
my rhymes are like 'ice cream vans at night' u 'know-it's-dope',
u alwayz 'raisin laughter'.............cuz u a 'growin-joke'! (K.O.)
^^^^^^^^ OK NICE CLOSA OVERALL 9/10
PROTELL
lol...with no "game" u cant get any word~"play" u fake jock...
this "lil kid" has pre~writtens..so im his "writers block".......
^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER
i'll quickly smak his tongue out his mouth...so he doesnt know wat victory tastes like...
then do uh "webscan" cuz u know he bites off other sites...
^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHHHH
throw this guy in tha slammer...he knows fake mc's are against tha law...
thats just 1 alias...tha other 1's lickin balls..
^^^^^^^^^ OK OK WHAT DA FUCK IS DAT
dude tryna "ride"~tha beat....while he know's "lil kids" cant "drive" automo~"bills"....
he couldnt "elevate" his "game" if he won "price"~is right" on tha biggest hill...(if u dont understand...ask me be4 u vote)
//^^^^^^^^ I UNDERSTAND NICE PUNCH HOMIE
this "lil kid" still doesnt listen 2 mom..."dont talk 2 "strain"gers..
or an "artery" will bust cuz im ur "danger"...(when u strain ur self 2 hard u could blow an artery)...
// AIGHT NICE
kill off this "kid" quick...he 2 "lil" 2 be in tha game...
i treat "herbs" tha same cuz there vunerable ta "flame"..
^^^^^^^^^ YO NICE CLOSA BUT AINT BETTA DAN LIL KID
8/10
AIGHT DIS SHIT IS AN CLOSE ONE FO SHO,BUT LIL KID EDGE A LIL BIT WITH DA CLOSA DA PUNCHES WERE THROWIN HARD NICE DROP PEEPS// LIL KID CLOSA CAME BETTA DAN URS PROTELL//
NO BEEF RETURN AN FAV
~PEACE~
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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