Intellectual ~ you had a lot of attempted punches. but, they were not clever at all. u just took two similarities and put like in them. not affective at all. any one can say.. 'ur weak like dick cheneys arteries' but if u said somethin like.. '3 shots at dick cheneys arteries still doesnt compare to your weakness..'(blah..) or some shit like that, is much more affective.. just try and be clever..

OnSlaught ~ you had better punches.. they were just really played.. and simple.. your flow was good.. pretty much a newbish verse... u really had no personals except the one which was kinda lame..

Both ~ both of you need to work on your multis.. even simple ones like: ass beating, last meeting, past bleeding. notice how all the syllables rhyme.. that improves your flow dramatically.. both of you have a lot of improving to do..i know intellectual has a large vocab that he didnt display in here.. but onslaught, ya need to expand ya vocab..

Final Thought ~ it was close.. but.. intellectual you had better flow.. all u gotta do is spread ur vocab around a little.. and get ur punches cleverer... but u did pull it out because of the tons of attempted punches.. and they werent AS played.. onslaught.. just.. work on ur multis.. and harder punches..

Vote ~ Intellectual