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Old 09-12-04, 12:54 AM   #15
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Voted For: A.K.A.

iight this was a pretty decent battle but ima have to hand this one to A.K.A he came made harder then Living...

Living
your verse was iight but ive seen alot better ..your puchlines werent really hitting hard....your personals were okay...i guess but none were really imazing....structure was okay but i kept jumpin .... multies....were pretty decent but seen better and some could have been worded alot better aswell...overall pretty decent verse ..but not enough to win this battle

A.K.A
pretty hot verse..your structure was alittle off and i really didnt like those / slash's in your verse you should have just seperated them with a , comma or something of that nature... your mulites were hot..and i really liked them..punchlines were hitten hard... personals were pretty good some were really good...structure was okay but i didnt like that i stated before the slash's in the verse...overall nice battle but ima have to give this one to a.k.a nice battle both

overall vote=aka
keep it up both nice decent battle
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