aight battle...here we go

DUB

rip torsos outta da backs of da wacks..
i got da tightes punches either spittin 15 barz
of text..or runnin 1-15 outta a gat/
lets raise da states and bet 50..so i can stack
a half of a ball(100) quickly..u spit of hatred

goodlines..its hard to find the rhyme scheme though...


i leave'ya with pea-size holes dat will constantly bleed..
rob u for ur crown and pawn it in for a 5$ sack bag of weed/

another nice line...you didn't need to explain with ()


LOC

Imma threat ta E-dub like WHITE BOYZ wit BLACK TRENCH COATS in KILLARADO,/
& he couldn't get shit CRACK-ILLAC-IN if he smoked rocks in an EL DORADO,/

hotline ryt off the top.....killarado nice...

& Im sorry DUB FAG-SON(ms jackson), but IM FO REAL like J-LO & JA,/
& U winnin this battle is just a FANTASY like the average man &

nice ....but we'll see if anyone else pics up on it...............

MENAGE ET TOIS,/!!!!!

both were cool....loc had easier flow to follow...less fillers..dub had more of them..got tired at the end of his vs. too long..
but loc had better creativity....if my vote counts()............


vote=LOC