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Better than you..
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This was feedback posted for CeRtIfIeDtHuG
IP:
to me this rhyme seems a lil bit i dunno......cardboard. by this i mean i didnt feel ya punchlines except for this...... dis faggot nigga pack s0o much fudge he stay shoppin in da bakery/
u could steal ery1's rhymes and still not be a legacy/
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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