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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
punch took this battle easy with loads of personals in his verse.....this was funny to read....it had some good wordplay and flowed well......this verse was also easy to read and was overall better then chillz
chillz had an iight verse....some nice metaphores....verse was kinda hard to read and THE FLOW WAS CHOPPY.......SOME ADVICE IS TO STRUCTURE YOUR VERSE so the punches are set-up better and they hit harder....but overall ima give this battle to PUNCH......chillz elevate playa
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