Voted For: Most

u won this battle by far theres really even no point in breakin this down.....ur verse had better flow.....it was easier to read....it had some nice metaphores....and some hard hittin' punches.....i was feelin this verse....
Overall=6/10

on the other hand the other verse was the wackest thing ive ever seen grace this site and i thing im dumber from reading it......its a disgrace to rb and rappers across the world...who ever typed this verse needs to die a horrible death.......nuff said...
Vote: most