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Old 09-12-04, 12:05 PM   #27
Kayem
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Voted For: Street Legend

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe (OK Punch ... Nice Multies)5/10

Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)(Didn't Really Make Sense, Decent)3/10

No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4) (Def One Of Ya Best Punches, Nice Personal)7/10

Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)
(Ur Best Punch, Good Personal)8/10

Empire:Overall... Good Structure And Flow ... Your First Two Punches Wern't That Great ... But They Picked Up ... Nice Multies Also ... Last Two Personals Were Real Nice ...

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
(Ive Seen Betta Openers But Decent Enough)5.5/10

you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
(Nice Vocab, Didn't really Hit Hard Though)4.5/10

i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose" (Nice Punch/Personal) 7.5/10

empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(Lol ... Good Personal, Best Line Of Tha Match ...)9/10

you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist (Decent Punch)7/10

Overall: Street Legend ...Structure Wasn't as Good As Empire ... But Was Was Definatly On Another Level With Tha Vocab ... That Personal, For Me Definatly Got Tha Match Won For You ...

Vote:Street Legend