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Old 09-12-04, 02:48 PM   #11
CataclyzM-i-C
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Voted For: Yvonne

ok 1st of all...idk why both of u think ur verse is so complex that no1 wud understand it...4 simple barz...dont gas yaself...but i'll b honest....heres da breakdown....

Punches - blahhhhhhhhh...very weak...none hardhittin but i'll give it to Yvonne...cuz they were SLIGHTY harder hittin then Dubz shyt...weak tho

Personals - Yvonne...only 4 the fact that he actually did try to get personal in his verse...Dubz wasnt very personal at all...jus some ramdom punches that were weak as well...

Meta4s - blahh...tie...none were really iLL like dat if there were any at all...so i gotta tie dat catagory

Wordplay - NONE...theres a problem wit both styles...Yvonne u kept switchin up ur Rhyme Scheme n it was makin ur verse sound worse...u was goin from AABB to ABAB...n it was startin to get confusin to where the punch was gna come in at...Dubz...ur wordplay was jus useless in wut u was sayin...none of it was special enuff to b used to DISS the other nigga u was battlin so dont gas urself wit dat last line u put !!!!!

Enjoyment - blahh...im gna have to tie this catagory 2 cuz i really wasnt feelin this battle...work on ya shyt iigh yall

but in da end i gotta give it to Yvonne cuz his punches were SLIGHTY harder n more direct n he had some personals in the mix as well...some of Dubz verse didnt even rhyme n if u gna have a short battle then at least rhyme it iigh...

Vote - Yvonne

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