wow, this was incredible, beautiful imagery and your words were so much deeper then i think these kids realize, i'm surprised i missed this, i liked the line "a mirror shattered and it cost me seven years to recover", a bad luck type line, you know like the superstition, this would make a great song,keep it up boi, and holla at your gurl, if you want to ever collab on a piece or open mic, i like your descriptiveness

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