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Old 09-12-04, 03:21 PM   #11
NoMercy
Banned: Cheating
 
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Voted For: Street poet

well you won this battle thats for sure yer stucture was good alright realy but you need to elavate on vocab:
punches: poet
vocab: poet
metas: no one
muulti's: poet
opener: pro
closnener: poet
v/ street poet
return the favour in my battle verse shake-spear in my sig thanks peace
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