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Old 09-12-04, 05:03 PM   #11
UnKnoWn-KiLLa
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Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouchable had this by far.....

ill renegade and rent a blade basically diminish your existence
kill you and win this gay ass battle before i finish a sentence

10/10
that ripped aberrant..

if tha game was ya dick, you couldnt get up on this rap shit
youll never surpass my bars like chin-ups from a fat-chick

6/10
Not a good verse


This dawg had visions of a win, but it was just a dream
aberrant only comes hard with asain porn and masturbation cream
9/10
that shit made me crack up lmao!

post ur rhymes next to mines and the truth of whack-ness will reflect
cause if u wrote ur punches on lego blocks, they still wouldn’t connect
8/10
plain verse but good..

connectin ya wit my final strike to leave ya in broken segments
if 1 line will fuck this bitch up then a verse will leave him pregnant

10/10
that shit was good...

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abberant.......

Your "wastin paper" writin down ya "uneconomical" lyrics
You couldnt structure somethin "explosive" if you were studyin "atomic" physics!!
9/10
That owned untouchablekilla

Come on, face the reality, your misty like water vapour
You couldnt write somethin hot if we set alight your fuckin paper!!
4/10

Not a good verse..


Ive caught this cunt off guard, leavin him battered, bruised and scarred
You couldnt "book" a place near me even if you owned a "library" card!!
7/10
that shit cracked me up...

Right, imma flip ya name and complete the process by changin the "tense"
*"killed" without touch* seems to make a lot more sense!!
5/10
plain and simple..



So im done, your merked, i just spat raps scripture
Like a winning bid at an auction.... sucka, you got the picture!!
8/10
Owned j00 untouchable..

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V/ UntouchableKilla