first joint i ever read by you... i see your not ashamed of your religion either... that's a good thing.. more people should have God in their lives... you had some real valid points in this piece... you've been watching the world... your eyes are open to the evils being done... keep spreading your message, man... maybe some of the others will wake up and change the way they live one day... maybe they'll remember this poem.... you never know what can change a persons life... words are very powerful weapons when used correctly... good shyt, yo... keep doing ya thizzle!