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Old 09-12-04, 05:47 PM   #32
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Voted For: konfuzed

check it

wordplaya...
good but nothing stood out it was just a good mood tho u got repetitive with that spread shit...ok flow no real punches coo' word play n srtucture...short for an unlimited...but good

konfuzed...
good shit...hot flow thru out...first line was good but da middle lacked substance...filler but it flowed well...nice structure...good content wit dat mj shit...last three lines were hot...

konfuzed got da vote for all around better verse

fuck konfuzed...fuck wordplaya...im out!
peace!
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