Thread: SoLe vs A.K.A.
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Old 09-12-04, 06:51 PM   #11
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Voted For: A.K.A.

this was a pretty weak battle but ima have to give this one to AKA

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aka


my verse step on ur ass like it was the soles of my shoe//
u 5 and 0 but i'm air you out like i was dj clue//
pretty hot opener
i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//
1st lines was alittle weak second nic
u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//
weak
you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//
decent
your from the dirty but you about to get washed//
it's over, your done, and all the beef is squashed//
okay closer

overall decent verse 7.5/10

sole
I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??
weak opener
you's-a-faggot, dude-ya-braggin', gettin beat by me was due-to-happen,
rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)
lmoa...good line
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered......
lol

::The finisher::

I'm about-to-haunt-you, im beatin you so bad, you'll wanna file out-a-lawsuit,
you fake skills, only reason you shine cuz ma reflections bouncin-off-you!!!!!
nice closer

overall nice verse 7/10
if you had came alittle harder you would have took this

overall vote-AKA
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