Voted For: Street poet

IIGHT STREET VERSE WAS BETTA..THA PUNCHES STRUCTURE,METAS,SOME PERSONALS A LIL VOCAB NOT THAT MUCH... YA LINES WAS A LIL 2 LONG MAYN

NOMERCY URS WASNT BAD JUSS YA STRUCTURE WAS OFF Y U HAVE WORDS N " THEY DONT HAVE N E THING 2 DO WITH WAT U GONNA SAY... FIX YA STRUCTURE AND HAVE HARDER PUNCHES ..NO HATE MAYN

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