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Voted For: DangerousMyndLunatic
Aight nothing too special in this battle,both were nearly above decent.
Boston,you had some OK personals and punches in your verse
and I feel like you couldve reworded some of the lines because they didnt flow smoothly.Your structure was so-so,but some of your stuff was too basic.Not too too bad of a verse.
Dangerousmynd,your verse was a lot shorter and more enjoyable to read although you had some crappy personals and punches in there but your verse was better because your punches hit a lil harder than bostons.If you both worked on your structures you'd be alot better.And also,reword some of your lines,some dont make too much sense (to both of you).
Keep elevating and goodwork.
V/ Dangerousmynd.
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