like the beat so far. ok first peerson came in. vocals are hard to understand. ur flow sounds too forced. vocals are low. not feelin it. 2nd person ... vocals are up now. i can hear the words lol tight i dunno, maybe i cant, it sounds like u put 2 vocals up to it, its kinda overlapped or something i cant understand the words at alot of parts flow is alright tho. 3rd person comes in, like the lyrics kinda echo'd, but i like tha flow. yep, still feelin this kid best so far. short part, next person. different typa kat. i like it tho. tight lyrics not as good as the dude b4 him tho. damn, short ass part as well. but all in all, the beat makes this track not suck. its like a mixture with developed mc's and beginer cats that dont seem to know what theyre doin yet. keep doin ur thing, ill always encourage rappers to be the best they can b. but the second to last dude was the best. now kindly respond to a track of mine or two. thanx