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Old 09-12-04, 09:33 PM   #19
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Voted For: Street poet

Streets Verse-
You claim you elevated..wit over 400 posts..i know you never go outside..
Leap Ya Pride..cause like racist mail man In black areas..You post n hide..
8/10 nice personals man

My take ova is about to start with you so become mah first elite victum....
And watch yeah win get cancelled quicker then wayan's brothers sitcoms.....
6/10 pretty nice

You'll get stabbed with writes, poet quick to put ya hands In ya dentures so you can grab a bite..
Who knew mercy gets slashed In fights.. end ya middle aged chrisis and like pc games give you half Life! ..
9/10 nice punches, and multis!!

Spread ya like bacterial might as well throw items In dumpsters, all Im doing Is wasting material ...
Grow Up mercy and bitch wash ya Vetereal... because It seems your only for kids like Trix Cereals !!...
7/10 the first bar was nice

My styles recievin In flares, make this kid step down And I aint talkin about leavin In stairs !...
Better start pleading and care, attack me with Ya head And still wouldn't percieve wins by a hair ..
8/10 lol nice!!

Get chained with big brained graphs.. sustain ya laughs kid becuase I heard ya give long head like girraffes.....
Cut ya frame In halves, Im insane with plans.. you stepped over the line so I slained Ya calves !! ....
10/10 that was sick

Street has very nice multis,wordplay, punches, disses, vocab and flow... U diffently got something.. I just thout u hit it harder

Mercy's verse-
Street poet think he can “tangle” with me but “cant” he even see that im almost a vet/(1)
Now im the only one that’s young like “proverse” we stay up and you better not bet/.(2)
5/10 this ok but was average.
Dropen you fast well be “done” with ease sometime I make yer mouth drop with “silence”/(3)
Cuz of the way I spit to “generic” and it makes you think im on the high of the streets with “violence”/.(4)
6/10 this was oooooooo k
Written songs I do that every day to “elevate” and take out bitches like you cuz im “generic”/(5)
Pff I kno yer “scared” of me but what can I say im to “barbaric”/.(6)
4/10 um some what ok..
Now you lost cuz of the way I threw it to yer “ear” to make sure you here, what now you “embarrassed”?/(7)
You to fake like a faggot nerd yer “bones weak” to easy to spit and break yer ear drums cuz yer the “rarest”/.(8)
0/10 ?????
Haha is what I will be saying after im threw with you it “happened” so fast/(9)
You fell to the ground and cryed and “snitched” cuz my rhymes are way over yours, you could say there “surpassed”/.(10)
6.5/10 average finisher..

Ur stuff had no punches, or,word play.. but flow, vocab, and some disses, it was quite average, U need to start playin with ur words and dont talk bout urself just concentrate on ya opponate, make fun of them.. ok.. elavate

Thats why i vote for Street...