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Old 09-12-04, 09:45 PM   #16
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Fiya Spitter wins this easily because her punches were actually good and her structure wasnt stretched as much as shoota's.
Shotta had some nice stuff,but the flow,and structure was so bad that it made the overall verse kinda bad.I liked shotta's lines about him breaking the rubber and that was about it.He had some crappy fake personals that made no sense at times like the lines about everlast and miss universe one too.Fiya,some of your lines were kinda crappy and the flow sucked but your lines actually made sense and the verse was good.I liked your last 2 lines about the 'in between the buns'.that was funny shit.Overall,shotta needs to work on making his lines more even and more real personals.Fiya,you need to work on having punches that hit just a lil harder.Nice verse from both.

V/ Fiya spitter.
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