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Old 09-12-04, 11:31 PM   #4
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Voted For: konfuzed

damn ima have to break this down
i dont even kno who im votin for yet...lol
good battle...

here goes!
opener...konfused...
You're here right now, but you're bout to be GONE, and SINCE,
I'm the one you're up AGAINST, say bye to your CONFIDENCE.
not hard for an opener but i thought it sounded good...

opener...sindrome...
Dayam.... kid must be 'konfuzed' tryin to ~verbally-abuse-me~
Shurrup Kid... or keep spitting your whackness to ~herbally-amuse-me~
ok content, nice sound but u deffinitly couldve worded it better
opener is a tie in my eyes...

sindromes 2nd bar...
first half was played but 'head shot' line was cool...

konfuzeds 2nd bar...
nice metaphore but delivery was lacking...

sindromes 3rd bar...
good concept n wordplay on da first line but da unemployment line didnt go good wit it...

konfuzed 3rd bar...
ok flow but comparison to da chick ellen dated didnt really hurt...sound ok but not a good choice...

sindrome 4th bar...
didnt like it...u were reaching for a multi u couldnt get a grip on n it messed up da flow...

konfuzed 4th bar...
coulda said it better...a little steched...not great but coulda been good

closer...sindrome...
'Just-To be Gay', get 'Gillette Hair Spray', So 'Ya Can Say' You 'Got Something The Best'
Cause for this nigga... whos Losings the Quest'.. theres "lessons to be learned" and you 'failed-the-Test'
first line was sketchy...second line had good content n metaphore but i think u shoulda came harder...ok bar tho...

closer...konfuzed...
My lines are almost up, but dawg, pound for POUND,
You're looking like Roy Jones, and this is the second ROUND...
dat was cool...good flow both lines connected with eachother well...great content wit dat roy jones pound for pound ko in da second round shit...good thinking...

closer goes to konfuzed

opener::tie
closer::konfuzed
structure::i think both were good
content::konfuzed
wordplay::sindrome
multis::sindrome...but they werent seriouse, konfused jus didnt have any...
flow::konfuzed
personels::sindrome
wow
konfused takes this for bassicaly having less streched lines
close as fuck!
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