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Old 09-13-04, 12:04 AM   #11
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V.A...nice verse.....lines i really liked...::


A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe

Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?


Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five

A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere

those were all dope....phantom..i've seen you do better....but it had it's bright parts..
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