Out-Spoken
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
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V.A...nice verse.....lines i really liked...::
A member of youth. Your wasting time here, go rake the leaves.
Goblin n ghost stories dont cut it, come back when your not make believe
Your still underground. When you open your mouth, no bodies hearing a sound.
Nineteen posts per day, how can a ghost be three fourths of the lyricist lounge?
Ai is far from such talent, and even farther from wise.
Id inquire more landed punches, even if each member started with five
A transperant being... can only decend in the air.
Well you wont escape fair... when the law of gravity applies everywhere
those were all dope....phantom..i've seen you do better....but it had it's bright parts..
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement
Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.
"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox
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