^^ lemme just get this straight....... flow is a big role in a decent verse.... and i know what multies and mettas are mayne.... ive been doing this battle verses for roughly a year now (well on and off) ...... i know when i c a decent verse.... allthough its difficult to always come up with it. lightning.... you had a hot verse.... you just need to concentrate on other aspects of a complete battle verse.... 1st comes flow, then punches, then mettas and multies.... keep to your style and youll be ill in no time

thats my fuckin 2 cents