The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
yo, I feel Phoenix had a better verse. Although both were tight.
Phoenix: Harder Punches, better wordplay, very creative at times.
Naughty boy: you had good vocab and alright punches. Structure needs to be cleaned up, I wasnt feelin it. I also do not like self-glorifying lines which you had a few, one more thing, I dont like lines ppl write that are like "your gay" "you suck" "you rape ppl" "ill punch you" Cause its all fake, and you dont know anything about your opponent on here...use real punches and if you wanna say that stuff to them, be creative with it like in metas or somethin, ya know?
Props to both tho, good verses, but this one in my opinion goes to Phoenix...peace...
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