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Old 09-13-04, 03:22 AM   #15
Spektikul
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

Here is my honest opinion/vote on this battle...

Punchline: Very good Structure, Excellent wordplay and whitty/clever punches. I really dug that verse man, 7.5/10
Props dawg, very well done.

Sole: I dont like self-glorifying lines, which you had a few, while punchlines verse had none, your structures are still kinda sketchy...try cleaning it up and make it easier to read, and you dont have to tell us where your finishers are cause its obviously the last bar of a verse for anyone...5/10
Good effort man, props

This is just an honest opinion on this battle that I posted. No hate boys, theres gotta be one winner and I felt that PunchlineKing just wanted it more and came out to win with this one...great job, peace.