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Old 09-13-04, 09:09 AM   #18
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Aiight. Personally, I gotta say gss took the battle.. No hate just truth.

Shotta, You need to work a lot on your structure, Some of your lines syllable counts were so un-even I had trouble finding the rhyme. There were also some parts I didnt understand the punches in.

GSS, your structure was a hell of a lot better then shotta's.. Still had some slightly stretched lines. And some of your punches didnt connect.. But it was a lot easier to read, and the disses were easier to get.

Overall, pretty weak battle.. But GSS definatly took it.
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