hmmm... it was kinda kool... i've seen you drop much better pieces though. I didn't feel as much emotion as the others felt. It seems like you had a hard time finding the right way to convey your message. I can almost hear the struggle in it when I read it aloud... It starts off strong and then stumbles somewhere in the middle but you managed to bring things back into focus by the end of the piece... not a bad drop at all but I've seen you do much better... just my opinion, though ( if ya didn't notice, I like to analyze shyt...lol)

keep 'em comin'