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Old 09-13-04, 02:20 PM   #12
~Luciano~
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Voted For: Poet

Pro~i felt what u was tryin 2 come with u had some nice complexity and ya wordplay was hittin there it was intresting
im not into topicals but you had some nice vocab and nice
intresting enders and closers you were hitting the subject
on point,But you could of used some Higher vocab thats
what pretty much hurt you in this battle.

Poet~Again you had a very nice drop ya open and close were nicely worded ya structure was perfect which matched ya complexity which it always should coincide with ya structure for a perfect drop.Ya wordplay was really onpoint was over your opponents which gave u the victory here~you had nice vocab also
so based on ya struc and setup wordplay and vocab u get the win here

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