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Voted For: AutoMATIK™
like hustlin four leaf clovers,this bitch pushin his luck...*
his rhymes could be given 'ass' like j-lo and still not look good...
1/10
to go up against me is crazy...ya must be one of these slowly risin emcess...
try to act BIG,and like fat americans..youll be tastin were the MACS be...**
2/10
this bitch couldnt submit a decent verse..even if i had him in a throat hold...***
bought his own c-d out the store...but his music still didnt get sold...
2/10
like sheep..ya minds followin the paths of other vet writers...
ya desperately tryna stop beef wit me.....like animal rights fighters...****
3/10
if ya lyrics composed music...theyd be producing they own collapse...
spin this fags head like a roof fan...leave him til his joints are snapped...
3/10
Mmmk intresting first u need 2 elevate and come with more clever punches~Wasent that bad but u can use some complexity and high vocab sumtin that seems a lil more complicated when u drop,Ya punches were ok u can jus base your self off these so focus on better and more complicated punches and Wordplay
From the blazin Barrow of my throat I’ll ‘slay this fool’
Face it dude, ill drag you across the street, until the ‘pavement’s smooth’
2/10
Wit spits that’ll leave yo rhymes beveled ,now who can ‘believe yo barz?’
You’ll ‘leave wit scars’ and the world can watch Trojan get poppin ‘between the walls’
2/10
I drop so much heat im ‘blastin satan’ so step and imma have dem ‘clappers watin’
Get relapsed when I ‘make shift’ and leave you wit mo pumps then ‘asthma patients’
4/10
Who can step to the dude … Im known as god, to make yo life ‘spiritually hectic’
Have rhymes that leave you *Lyrically Infected* when my verbs get you ‘mentally infected’
7/10
Hmm pretty nice drop wasent tha best ive seen from u but shit im tryin 2 find myself righ now also.Ya wordplay started off average but towards the end kicked up better.Complexity was ok ya structure was heavely stretched minus points for those.Punches was were alright some hella played but other were clever
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