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IP:
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Interesting battle, both came with a very different style.
VA: I had to read it twice to get it.. But I can now see exactly where you were going with your verse. Made some nice connections with life.. I especially liked the line..
Life Withstands My Fuse, Quick Tempers Got Me Stayin At The Local Inn.
Unaproachable, Only Conversate When I Polish My Throat With My "Social Ginn".
I took from that someone who only really comes out of their shell when their at weak points (being drunk).. It was a nice metaphor on introvert personalitys.. Rhyme wise, there were some lines that were stretched and the verse would have benefitted from better structuring.. But for the most it flowed correctly..
Cerulean: Rhyme wise, this verse killed VA's verse. However there were a lot of words and metaphors used I didnt know the reason for.. It seemed you were going off in a tangent.. Im not sure if this was because you knew what you were talking about and it was hard for me to decypher, or if there was no real meaning to your choice of words and connections.
Anyway, Personally, Im gonna give the vote to VA. But keep elevating both of you.
peace.
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