I liked this a lot, the flow was nice and the knowledge was well developed, had some wordplay and was quite hard hitting... The flow was sturdy, multies and some internal rhymes made it nice... The wordplay was always working, there were some nice similes in there and it come strong throughout, with good technique and lines... Vocab didnt seem to be a problem either, some decent words used... It was a solid piece, I would suggest spit something with substance that might elevate you, mos def got potential though... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...