I aint feeling the whole gangsta ish of this, the concept was aight, good battle sense but it didnt really have a lot of depth, it was a bling bling rhyme... The flow was aight, there were some multies, it did come choppy in places but it werent bad, more multies were needed... You need to incorporate more wordplay into your verses, and up the vocab slightly, aint a bad piece, you have got elevating to do... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...