Its not a bad piece, thought it was quite simplistic and the flow werent really going no where... Some ideas were nice, with some lines being powerful... The flow was hella simplistic, not that many multies, something you need to improve on, but it kept sturdy on the rhythm... The vocab was aight, a lot of "TION" rhymes, but there were some good knowledge words in... Try to incorporate something with meaning, or use more wordplay in pieces like this, it jus werent going anywhere... Keep spitting and elevating, you got the potential...

Peez...