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Old 09-14-04, 09:34 AM   #7
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Voted For: the_crazy_one

Aiiight
Crazy Really Went All Out On This One, Nice Verse Crazy...

Punches Connected, Few Decent Metas n Multiwes, Aight Worldp[lay, Could Improve Ya Structure But Ya Lines n Personals n Shit Hit Alot Harder Than Ya Oppenent..

Duck, Ya Flow Was Neither Here Or There, Kinda Inconsitent Verse, Some Lines It Was Dope, Others Is Str8 Wack, No Hate...But Work On Bein Alot More Constistent In Ya Verse n LKess Fillers, Know What I'm Sayin?
Dont Just Add Lines Cause They Rhyme, Try Addin A Personals Or Punches Instead Of Fillers, Understand Me?

Keep Elevatin Yall n No Hate

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