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Old 09-14-04, 04:05 PM   #12
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

MR. Zachy had sum personals with the "thinks he's black and thinks he's down line".. not too bad, but M.Z.D. your flow was way too simple.. it rhymed so it coulda been a good flow if it had quality but it seemed like a poem, just like the end of your verse.. it shoulda stayed in poetic scriptures.. you didn't deliver any punches.. just two personals... and S.S. you verse wasn't bad.. you had a few downfalss like the separation of words like wasted, you don't need to put dashes between words that complete a multis but overall you had the better flow.. vocab was lil betta than M.Z.D... and your had delivered sum decent punches.. so you get the vote.. no hate either, just simple truth..
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