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Old 09-14-04, 04:29 PM   #4
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Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

uhmmm
aight, skills got this..
some aight wordplay n punches, the BRAT line was humouress, n humour is always a good thing..
maybe could improve structure? didnt have trouble readin it, but its prolly the thing u need to workon most, on the whole, nice drop...
keep em comin girl...

eyvon, ya flow was neither here or there, ya opener lacked the hard hittin personal that ms skills dropped, ta structure need improvin too, but ya had some hella nice lines in there, an ya vocab seemed more complex than ms skills, but ms skills was humouress n better punches, try mixin ya vocab with humouress lyrics n you'll definately goplaces eyvon!

no hates ladies n keep the rhymes comin

p e a c e
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