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Old 09-14-04, 04:36 PM   #13
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Voted For: Street poet

poet took this with better punches, personals, structure, word use...young is an amature compared to poet...i really liked tha finisher for poet...it was hard and came at young very well...this isnt the best ive seen from u...but it got the job done...young u need to elevate and try not to overplay lines...be more crative...vote poet...was just better
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