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Old 09-14-04, 04:48 PM   #8
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Voted For: Street poet

aight...good battle...gifted ure an up ad comming rapper...but ure gonna need a lot abit more to edge poet...ok poet...i like how u played ure barz out....they were long...but they hit EVERY time...u had good word use...punches were striong...multies everywhere...personals were good...and the wordplay was excelent...i like some of the subjscts u used...and gifted...u did well also...BUT...u need to get more creative...and use better words...vote poet...its just better
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