Banned: Biting
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IP:
Voted For: the_crazy_one
you be the blood i be the crip,/
bullet holes in ya face -homicide in your fuckin crib.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHH NOT AN GOOD OPENR TO ME
you talk to much shit -time to put an end to it,/
bust ya voice box ya family watches as paramedics have ya body zipped.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK KID WHERE DA PUNCHES AT
i throw lyrics like fireballs,/
victim = blood 4 life pierce his torso.//
^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD INFANT PUNCH
you slang lifes a bitch so you gonna pop your self o in ya asshole,/
plese dont -ill leave my phone number call me when you become suicidal.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight dats a good punch
ill do the job quick with pride,/
piss on your tombstone - and run away with ya wife.//
^^^^^^^^^ not an good closa
lyrically blessed my words are like bullets there hard to digest/
commin at ya neck harder than a dracula on meth/
^^^^^^^^ flow where'z da punch
me merkin u in a battle is undeniable u a unloyal bitch u unreliable im jus that damn versitile/
^^^^^^^^ vocab flow and a punch
its funny ur 16 but ur occupation says u kill fellas/
the only thing u eva killed was hoagie ur overzealous/
^^^^^^^^ flow vocab and a punch
nigga u aint "the crazy one" i smash u wit beats like dat nigga farell/
its real funny how u say u kill people but havent been on the ther side of a jail cell/
u aint even notrious ya name rings -no- bells-
ill smoke bricks by ya head blow u up like a -dope -sale-
^^^^^^^^^^^^ yo nice closa
aight it came down to punches the crazy ur shit was too basic to me (my opinion) u had no vocab but punches were good yo opner and da closa was wack~but u got betta on dem 2 parts in da middle (punches)
upfront nice verse i like yo opener and da closa i was mainly lookin at that when i saw yo 2 middle partz verse u had vocab flow and a punch but didnt hit hard enough keep at it mayne ur gettin betta~
dats why i should give crazy one da vote
no hate,no beef just my opinion
~peace~
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