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Old 09-14-04, 05:29 PM   #10
Terumoto
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yours was really hard to read... do something bout ya structure... cos im sure there was flow in there but i couldnt find it.. punches were nuthin special..

triple:
good verse. Creative punches, steady flow,nice wordplay.. nice structure.. a couple lines made me laugh.. and the rest hit hard.. so s'all good with ya verse.
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