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Old 09-14-04, 06:51 PM   #12
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Lemme start by saying that I respect both of these kats skillz... Ice tore me a new one in our last battle and OMB is just plain old nice with the verbiage!

Now... I was expecting this battle to be a lot closer than what it was. OMB took it to Ice and I was sure I was gonna come back just as hard... but... it didn't happen that way.

let's go through the verses, shall we?

Fa real, just listen, my raps hurt... slash herbs, Pistols n missiles attack nerds
Ya couldn’t solve the mystery of my dopeness if ya initials were backwards!!*

killer opener! hottest dis on IP's name since I been on the site.

Racked n serviced, bashed n’ murdered, like a rusty hatchet, this hack is worthless
Why should I pick at the ice to melt ya… Im so hot all I gotta do is scratch the surface

average line for OMB... prolly great to someone else but I seen him hit way harder...

Multiple blessings, I got godly multis, fresh from the heavens to send ya to hell
You know im good.. ya already granted me leverage.. cos said it yaself!!

personals w/proof is always good

Fake ass, “ya shit aint real” n’ ya text is wack, get over it ya “cyber fan”..**
after this you’ll be scared of ya own shadow like arachnaphobia to spiderman!

liked the setup but the second part was kinda regular... slightly effective...kinda funny though...lol

Man, my verse is nice but its safe to say ya fell apart with yours
A non-newbie battle got ya more “hung up” than “telemarketers"

ehhh... OMB brought his skill level down a notch with this line... kinda filler for a dude with his talent

Appear behind ya, precise, slice n dice with spikes n knifes, ya body parts popped in a truck
Disect ya wordplay, slash ya punches… but leave ya flow, cos that shits already choppy as fuck

WHOA!... I liked that shyt right there! Startin to complicate his flow a lil bit... only real talents can pull this kinda shyt off right

Rip cats as a hobby for fun, take a good look at Lusiv, kids. that's what you call a disgrace
n' I'd newbie bash dudes too, but if i stooped to your level.. i'd have balls in my face.

Wow... decent closer... nothing more to be said about this verse 8.5/10

IcePick:

got Ice Pissed Off??..best "turn " ya' keyboard Off
it's SUICIDAL thinkin' we'd battle and U wouldn't get ya' multi's tossed

stretched and forced... weak opener... I expected better from you, Ice

or Stabbed wit Pitch Forkz..Tagged as a Stiff Corpse
for speakin' like "Broadz on Morning Radio Showz"..He'z all Bitch Talk!!

Nice.. not a personal but a very nice punch

'dis fUUckin' Prick'z Soft..his IMPOTENT mind can't "Rise" to da Challenge
Who "drove" U insane??..{answer}ICE Supplied him da MILEAGE

uhhh... challenge.... milage... ehhh omma say no that one

Divide U wit Talonz..ya' Silenced when da words hit ya' Porez
Omb's an ACTRESS..he made his Debut Naked in kids Pornz

definitely filler... not feeling it at all

'dis battle'z merely a RE-enactment of a retard tryna Match Witz
imma End ya' Planz and "peel" ya' Bleek raps Now .U're flows
is' "Limp"

forced again... nice set up but failed to understand the punch

got a FEW Votez for sum multi's and U're cocky and Talkin' Sh!t!!
One man band with his One Man Hand always ready to jerk his dick

non-personal punch... everyday filler line.... ehhhh... what's really going on with you in this battle Ice?

U Scrappy and show Resistance..but left torn."siTTin" on Turdz
your mouth is my personal Toilet Bowl..ICE P always
"sh!ttin" on HERBZ!!

wow... a very regular closer... i expect sum'n like this from a newb.

i don't know what to say... Ice usually hits way harder than this but it is what it is... 6.5/10

disappointing re-match... OMB takes this one
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