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Old 09-14-04, 07:57 PM   #30
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Ight this is how I see it......

KPD:
I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
8/10 - Nice intro, usage of metas and similes

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
7/10 - Could have been better, wording was off

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
7/10 - Very weak punch, wording was off

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
9/10 - Good comeback from last line, nice closer
total: 31

Trooper:
Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
8/10 - Solid intro and opener

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
7/10 - Average punchline, not hard hitting

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
7/10 - Average again because of lack of hard punchline

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
8/10 Very solid and great closer
Total:30

Conclusion:
Both were ok drops, KPD had inconsistancy in his delieverance and Trooper's sentences set up for a great punchline, but lacked the deliver. My vote goes to KPD.
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