the medicine man
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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
aiight battle first off cf gotta work on hi structre and flow cuz that was the hardest verse i ve had to read. no dis just line up ya lines and you'll have a better verse. hollow dct verse but in a couple lines u squeezed 3 in an it aint flow. punches werent hard but i felt the hunger in ya verse..last line was lackluster yet better than cf closer was wack ya whole verse sound like u wa talking on the phone and tips verse sound like an argument in the hood but overall that was better to read
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